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Esther Sylvester

  • General Articles Re: Ambition.

    My pleasure.

    Apr 8, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)

    I know a lot of people have posted their opinions, but I just want to say that I like this a lot. I simply adore her eyes! I have to ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deception--Chapter 1

    Hello Apple! I will be reviewing you today and you don't have to give me a elephant-er hippo if you review my work as well. (Nudge nudge wink wink) First ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Ambition.

    This was quite interesting, I must say. I was looking through the non fiction and your title caught my eye. I thought the last part was quite lovely. Sometimes I ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Green Tree chapter two .

    Hey Zibbie! Thanks for the review, again. Okay, I'm going to say that I enjoyed this chapter more than the first. It flowed to me better and I liked the ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Bonjour

    Welcome Navita! Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! I'm new as well and I am already nearly addicted. Seems like you have a lot of experience with writing. ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-

    Hey there! This was a very strong start for a book. You did very well with keeping the reader interested. I found that some of the bad language was not ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2

    This is the second chapter to my romance novel, "The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever". Please let me know your thoughts! CHAPTER TWO _______________________ The carriage careened across the bumpy

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.

    Thanks for the welcome, Demeter! I have found it difficult to find someone who likes the Lord of the Flies as well. Perhaps it is for people with different tastes? ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Perfect Storm Chapter 1 & 2

    Hey Wasted Fantasy! I shall be reviewing you again! Hurrah! Once again another solid piece. You made me feel pain for Johnny and his life of lovelessness. (yup, it's a ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.

    Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm glad you all liked it to some extent! Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. I probably wouldn't have dealt with them on ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Green Tree chapter one

    Hey Zibbie! I shall be reviewing you today. First off, I would like to say that the story caught my attention right away. I liked how the story escalated in ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.

    Thanks for all the warm welcome guys. I hope to get in better contact with all of you. I shall address you all in a single bound. To Mizzle: You ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Untitled chapter 1

    Hey WF, thanks for the review. And now I will do the same! I enjoyed this. I can't wait until you define the characters more and I understand more about ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.

    “Y-you are impossible!” the princess quavered. She was soaked from head to toe with ice water. Her hair was ratted and makeup streamed down her face. She really was a ...

    Apr 6, 2010


Everything has a consequence and every consequence leads to death.
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