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Re: Ambition.
My pleasure.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)
I know a lot of people have posted their opinions, but I just want to say that I like this a lot. I simply adore her eyes! I have to ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Deception--Chapter 1
Hello Apple! I will be reviewing you today and you don't have to give me a elephant-er hippo if you review my work as well. (Nudge nudge wink wink) First ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Ambition.
This was quite interesting, I must say. I was looking through the non fiction and your title caught my eye. I thought the last part was quite lovely. Sometimes I ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Green Tree chapter two .
Hey Zibbie! Thanks for the review, again. Okay, I'm going to say that I enjoyed this chapter more than the first. It flowed to me better and I liked the ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Bonjour
Welcome Navita! Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! I'm new as well and I am already nearly addicted. Seems like you have a lot of experience with writing. ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
Hey there! This was a very strong start for a book. You did very well with keeping the reader interested. I found that some of the bad language was not ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2
This is the second chapter to my romance novel, "The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever". Please let me know your thoughts! CHAPTER TWO _______________________ The carriage careened across the bumpy
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.
Thanks for the welcome, Demeter! I have found it difficult to find someone who likes the Lord of the Flies as well. Perhaps it is for people with different tastes? ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Storm Chapter 1 & 2
Hey Wasted Fantasy! I shall be reviewing you again! Hurrah! Once again another solid piece. You made me feel pain for Johnny and his life of lovelessness. (yup, it's a ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.
Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm glad you all liked it to some extent! Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. I probably wouldn't have dealt with them on ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Green Tree chapter one
Hey Zibbie! I shall be reviewing you today. First off, I would like to say that the story caught my attention right away. I liked how the story escalated in ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.
Thanks for all the warm welcome guys. I hope to get in better contact with all of you. I shall address you all in a single bound. To Mizzle: You ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Hey WF, thanks for the review. And now I will do the same! I enjoyed this. I can't wait until you define the characters more and I understand more about ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.
“Y-you are impossible!” the princess quavered. She was soaked from head to toe with ice water. Her hair was ratted and makeup streamed down her face. She really was a ...
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